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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-26 20:41 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-3-7 01:35 编辑

春夏秋冬

月亮挂松梢,严寒难摧梅朵魄,骚翁冬夜诗情涌
冰棱垂殿角,瑞雪定兆稻香年,画叟夏晨墨趣生
霞光侵古道,忘年好友酒千盅,春曲雅词真浪漫
鹤影掠池塘,流水高山诗万里,秋霜凉露特晶莹

注:第一四句罗志海作,第二三句钱永德作。


Spring, Summer, Autumn And Winter

The moon hangs on the top of the pine trees
the cold is hard to destroy the soul of the plum blossom
and an old poet is full of emotion in the winter evening
The ice crystal hangs on the eave of the temple
the auspicious snow determining the promise of the year of the rice fragrance
and an old painter’s ink interest generates in the summer morning

The crane shadows fly across the pond
the flowing water and the high mountains
poems in ten thousand miles
and the autumn frost and the cold dew are crystal clear
Rays invade the ancient road
good friends despite the difference in age drink a thousand cups of wine
the spring music and the elegant lyrics are really romantic


Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/26/2020格律体新诗 ● 十九绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Nineteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9746首对联体诗
The 9,746th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... ndant-year/#content

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-19 07:17 | 显示全部楼层
曲舞

矶在渡头卧
瀑于崖顶悬
笙箫音袅袅
蝶燕舞翩翩


Music And Dance

A rock lies on the ferry
A waterfall hangs from the top of cliff
The music of reed-pipe wind instrument and vertical bamboo flute are lingering
Butterflies and swallows dance lightly

4/18/2020格律体新诗 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9910首对联体诗
The 9,910th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/contend-in-beauty/
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-28 20:22 | 显示全部楼层
楚楚动人

昨夜秋风吹妾冷
今宵明月惹人怜
花开富贵莺啼翠
梦到功名燕舞翩


Delicate And Attractive

The autumn wind cold to blow to my wife last night
The bright moon was provoked pity tonight
Flowers in bloom being rich and honored
and the orioles sang greenly
Dreamt of fame and fortune
and swallows danced light

4/27/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9969首对联体诗
The 9,969th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/dawn-swallows/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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